Link to story- http://parisoneproductions.blogspot.com/p/the-knockers.htmll
"The Knockers" is a story like "Trif-Awwwns", but it follows Anthony outside of the restaurant he works in and puts him with his friends Austin, Abdu and Ethan. Now these characters are very much like the characters in my previous stories in terms of their personalities. In the first chapter of, "The Knockers" not a lot is revealed of the characters, we get to know that Ethan isn't the most normal kid you would meet, but we never really learn what Anthony, Austin, or Abdu is like. I do intend to go further into detail with these characters, but I had to make sure that this first chapter was weird, fun, and most of all, I needed it to be interesting. I'll be the first to admit that there isn't a clear story in place yet, but the story will evolve and we will learn more about these four wacky heroes. All I can say about the second chapter of "The Knockers" is it's title. The Field Trip. That's all for now I hope you enjoyed the first chapter, if you have any suggestions about the story please feel free to comment below, because I am just starting this out and need some pointers. Anthony out!
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